I.
Trees swift and sway about without my help,
And alas. Fortnight ‘pon fortnight,
I near not glance.
(Beings never do)
Doth the wind fault on me?
Remorselessly so-
In a field of antiquity in rows-
That pales beneath a stroke of time.
As we both now,
(You and I)
whirl,
backwards.
II.
And when Autumn breaks its final fall
Doth these trees savor thine call?
-Catch me now -When I sing-
-To reflect these small mirror’d things
That in the sky show their beaut
As deaf becomes the player’s lute
(I glance now at you,
With songs stuck inside your hair.)
III.
And now I rest,
For some time.
Before the trench,
Fills it’s vines,
With myself.
‘Pon it’s knees,
Before we find,
A sanctity,
For your love,
and your hate,
That climbs above,
And hits stars straight.
As we flutter with them
(You and I)
To hear Kingdom come
As they swerve you nigh.
December 4th, 2010 at 4:38 pm
Very nice flow, enjoyed the feel of it
December 5th, 2010 at 2:27 am
“With songs stuck inside your hair” – lovely –
You are an amazing writer!
December 5th, 2010 at 7:16 pm
Very nice use of archaic English to add atmosphere. It’s hard for most to master! I love the image of songs caught in the hair- really evocative that. Almost a poem in one line.
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December 6th, 2010 at 4:13 am
I am in love.
Your style is enchanting 🙂
December 7th, 2010 at 9:56 am
Calm & Serene….tone of the poem what I felt…neat!
December 10th, 2010 at 3:38 pm
lovely piece 🙂
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January 17th, 2011 at 6:20 pm
I really enjoyed the change of pace through the sections of the poem. Really interesting style. Also loved the imagery put forth.
February 5th, 2011 at 11:47 pm
Simply beautiful,
Peace,
Laz